55 or Less
The step that matters
Sitting at the beach, we stared at the sunset.
Waves roared as they came to us but receded just before they touched my feet.
She said “I am like the wave, this is as far as I can get. You have to take the next step!
I nodded and stepped back
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Runaway Bride
Commotion – our neighbor Aunty was waving wildly to someone.
As I ran to the scene of action, the guy started the bike and zoomed away. As the smoke cleared, we could see the girl bid a teary eyed farewell.
I said – It’s Didi
Aunty wryly said “Yes beta, she’s gone”
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Was it a Dream
Another wicket down – India 137 - 5
I turned off the TV in despair. Started cursing the team angrily for the pathetic performance
An hour later, I turned on the TV to see how we lost only to see an Indian player hit the winning runs!!
It was the Natwest final
Sitting at the beach, we stared at the sunset.
Waves roared as they came to us but receded just before they touched my feet.
She said “I am like the wave, this is as far as I can get. You have to take the next step!
I nodded and stepped back
---------------------------------------------------------------
Runaway Bride
Commotion – our neighbor Aunty was waving wildly to someone.
As I ran to the scene of action, the guy started the bike and zoomed away. As the smoke cleared, we could see the girl bid a teary eyed farewell.
I said – It’s Didi
Aunty wryly said “Yes beta, she’s gone”
---------------------------------------------------------------
Was it a Dream
Another wicket down – India 137 - 5
I turned off the TV in despair. Started cursing the team angrily for the pathetic performance
An hour later, I turned on the TV to see how we lost only to see an Indian player hit the winning runs!!
It was the Natwest final
posted by tcr_79 at
6:12 PM
6 Comments:
hi ...
liked ur first story ... it was awfully good ....
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~*. D E E P A .* ~, at 10:53 PM
n , me 1st to comment too !!!!
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~*. D E E P A .* ~, at 5:12 AM
Deepa - thanks...
And yes you have both the first and second comments ;-)
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tcr_79, at 7:57 AM
Welcome:
Thank you
Well I am not a writer, it is pretty difficult as there are not too many words to play with
But it is really good fun - trust me
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tcr_79, at 11:08 AM
WOW, the first one was really kool. Good post!
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Praveen, at 3:11 AM
O God...I understood your attempt only after reading the comments.. Sigh!!
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